Conform

Women, be a woman

With a strong will and bright mind

That will disobey the keepers orders

Who say the new wrong is so right.

Like puppeteers they pull our strings

Choreographing a new trend

Of the kind we all accept

Of the type we choose to blend.

But oh damn the consequences reap what they sow

With the young suicide girls

Hanging in a row 

On a path paved with blood on the newly fallen snow.

Because oh, hot damn, society can choke.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Both pieces that you've requested I read are equally breathtaking. One focuses on the abusive relationship, and another that focuses on feminism and the clutch society has on women. Your last line is damn breathtaking and magnificent, and it emphasizes how much society has affected the young females of our society. Society is sick, or at least partially, not counting the equality groups and the organizations working to put a stop to it (of which I am gladly a part of). This was a definite need to write, well done, I admire this.

[Riley Bray]

Thanks Tai that honestly means a lot to me. I feel like no matter how much this topic is written about it isn't enough until it makes a difference. It's nice to hear you also support what so many people really need, thanks for the review Tai!