'After a long time"

that nostaligic revival we fell at meeting those with whom we watered the field of happiness!!!!!

That coat of honeycomb to the reality

that smell of fragrance from its core

the sudden life that gets breathed in

the purest composition ever exhaled

that saggregation of time into time

the ressuruction of beauties to the moment

the reward that is a blessing

the contentment that we take home!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

please feel free to share ur views about this.............

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

too much black honey will make you sore.

[junaid altaf]

i didnt get it but thanks for the review

[lee von cleef]

a Bedouin tribesman told me it was not for women, but would make a man stiff.

[junaid altaf]

oh my...wat a concept......................

[lee von cleef]

Black honey that the stuff!

[junaid altaf]

stuff...........its application?

[lee von cleef]

eat it on your toast. with butter,jam, then follow it up with a shot of tea.

[junaid altaf]

its an eatable.......!!!!!!!! black magic was enough now itz time for black honey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[John]

A poem that gives thanks for life and art.

[junaid altaf]

a good conclusion............

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice write ... Well penned

[junaid altaf]

thank u sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Keep shining ...:)

[junaid altaf]

so keep reflecting!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahah

[Sami Khalil]

I always do ... I love deep writes that are thought provoking like yours...

[junaid altaf]

provoker........... i was always named so......... haha m just new to this forum but i think it has a mysterious world of imaginations and expressions just oozing out..........

[Sami Khalil]

That is my advice if you accept ones . Never write cliche poems but unique ones that is wholly your imagination and emotions...Be different and one of a kind...I say it in a spirit of friendship...

[junaid altaf]

i will stick to it!

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[junaid altaf]

ithen i m the joker"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" y so c re yes""""

[Sami Khalil]

Not really . I just like Batman ...Hahaha

[junaid altaf]

choices are our children!!!!!!!!!!!!! we should love them............

[Sami Khalil]

That is a brilliant saying . So true ... Thank you Junaid...