A promised reward

this simply is the conclusion i gained from the word perseverance in the context of my life!!!!!!!!!!!

Surfing on the waves of time

i seem it is revived

but

in a way

i can't understand

the betterment of a future is its promised 

reward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

would love to have your review.........

Reviews

[Frieda P]

It seems to me knowledge is power in this write, and having lived proves to make us the person we are today, or tomorrow. Nice one.

[junaid altaf]

thanks frieda

[Frieda P]

My pleasure.

[junaid altaf]

"your welcome maam"

[Devanshu Rajput]

greatly and nicely done...wonderful read...keep writing

[junaid altaf]

thanks devanshu........

[Devanshu Rajput]

i said what was true

[junaid altaf]

so nice of u

[Sarah Redigan]

I could be very wrong but what I got out of this is that it is okay to not understand what is happening at all times and to just go with the flow

[junaid altaf]

thats wat i have written.......its actually all about realising and continuing

[Sarah Redigan]

Very well done deary

[junaid altaf]

it happens!!!!!!!!!

[David Scott]

This has a promising feeling to it.
This one line needs work, "i seem it is revived".
Why say "it" when you can use the word your trying to say? Like "life" or "time" or "love" or "eternity" etc... Also, i seem it dies not translate well. Maybe it seems, or i see...
Otherwise, I loved the write.

[junaid altaf]

thank you for your advice david.......... i just actually wanted to update a status on fb and then came up with this.......posted it on both but!!!!!!!!!

[MindCage]

Thought inducing

[junaid altaf]

yes you got it right...........its all about the induced time effect!!!!!!!!!!!!