"Black silence"

desperate, full of questions, full of anxiety and other associated feelings..........and when a soul with burden just gets a bit closer to nature and sees himself through the eyes of nature!

black silence touched my soul

as i was thinking about my own thinking

everything seemed to be created

as if singing melodies for their creator

i could feel the reason of my existence

as if realisation was the mother of time

i felt an abundance of joy

as if happiness had pierced my being

the feeling came and vanished like a gust of wind

as if it was a message to keep on living!

junaid altaf

Author's Note

i felt it , i came home , i put it in the form of words!

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This was really nice and thoughtful.The inner musings of a wondering soul :)

[junaid altaf]

thank you vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Elina]

This is beautifully written, and so very relatable. I quite enjoyed this.

[junaid altaf]

thank you elina

[Glen Yumang Manese]

At times... the silent nature of understanding gives us balance... and this verse does that... and once the feeling left you... the motivation kept... lingering inside...

[junaid altaf]

yes it will always be there

[Flutterby aish]

Wow..........once again........u rock!!!! :p Well your poem was spectacular in the most amazing manner! Each word defines your emotions, and you can feel every single line!!!! It's truly amazing!!!!! Great job done.......thanx for sharing!

[junaid altaf]

thanks for always appreciating

[Flutterby aish]

Welcome! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly creative and expltive piece that stands erect, well done, good read.

[junaid altaf]

thanks thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your most welcome.

[junaid altaf]

my pleasure

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ah..very refreshing...and profound as said by sir tate

[junaid altaf]

thanks

[Tate Morgan]

very profound I have had few of these revelations in my life too. A moment of pure clarity.

[junaid altaf]

and the thing to be noticed is that we feel like such when we are really desperate

[Tate Morgan]

Yes it is adreanaline that does it my best works come from similar times when i was desperate

[junaid altaf]

we actually need to get a bit aside from the deceptive world we love to live in

[Tate Morgan]

yeah I suppose you are right