A Sonnet for the Pained Brave

Sheltered heart of a young bovine,

Confused mind, its veins intertwined.

Tears caress that tortured skin,

Speak, the wounds, its scars like twins.

The angry hatred, the twists of fate,

Shattered the young, the fair intimate.

Tall shadows stand in the dark, between,

Bloodshot eyes, a stench of benzedrine.

Thunder beats the shaken roar,

Shrieks torment, that secret woe.

The sound fades, the sung silence,

Seek the prayer, her true defiance.

Announce her strength, untangle hope,

The courageous, the fear to cope.

Reviews

[Pax]

wow, i see you have an amazing vocabulary kabayan...
i liked the deep sadness i see, the vulnerable pain and find strength with it..
this is really well written, amazing...

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you very much for this review! :D

[}Echo{]

Very well written. I love this. You're a really great writer.

[GJ]

Poignant. Very well written. I loved it, start to end.