My Beauty

For the "Impress me contest" 50 words or less

 

My Beauty!

 

 

My beauty

You are fair of face

Your body lean

And full of grace.

 

You glide around

With mysterious air

Head held high

Like you don’t care.

 

Some nights you leave,

I don’t mind that

But come home again

Sweet puddy cat.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG 19/03/08

Author's Note

Anything you wish to say....

Reviews

[Jessie]

AHHHHHHhahahahahaaaaa!!!!! I love this! It completely caught me by surprise, the puddy cat...haha.

:) :) :) :)
four smilies for you!

[Lorna Lee]

What an awesome portrayal of one of Gods most graceful creatures. This stanza completely describes a siamese cat my sister and I had growing up and also her black cat "Smokey" that she has now.

"You glide around
With mysterious air
Head held high
Like you don't care."

Actually, you could have put Tiki's picture up there (the Simese), it described him so perfectly. I really love this. ~Lorna Lee

[DarkAngelWriter]

Aww this made me think of my boyfriend's cat, Socks. lol