THE EXIT

For the "Laughing Limmerick Lovely Logo"contest

 

 

 

The Exit

 

 

On this road is an exit called eight

People believe is an exit gate

Where an arrow points high

Leading up to the sky

What do we do, drive on, or just wait

 

ã Copyright jen-JG 12^th July 2008

 

 

Author's Note

whatever you wish to say honesty is good

Reviews

[radian7]

I agree with Teenage Poet about this poem. Has the fun rhyme and rhythm goin' on as well as an interesting message that could be read into it. Clever.

[bailish]

I wish I had something clever to say
I wish there was a better way
To tell you it's as good
As the others I've rood
But there isn't so I'll just say, "Good day."

[A.J. Smith]

Very clever! I like this one a lot. :)

[Teenage poet]

Short and simple yet still very powerful like there is a hidden meaning behind it.