10 / 40 Challenge

for the Alberts Poets cafe advanced 10/40 words with Tolvi

 

10/40 Challenge

 

 

Ah,

your perfume drifts beyond my senses

your splendid presence enhances my oblivion

 

leaving me purer than etched crystal glass

 

reflecting sky with sunset rays

and serene glide of swans,

one and two

 

knowing

my

demise cannot be merciful

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG

 

Author's Note

anything you wish to say - honesty is good,

Reviews

[Tovli]

this is a fine and tightly woven little poem! well done. tovli

[ZeeArsonist]

this stands apart from everything i've read here tonight.
beautiful talent,
its an honor to see how you work.

well done. well done. well done.

[leaving me purer than etched crystal glass] - f*****g beautiful