My Rose Garden

for Alberts Poetry Cafe advances 10/40 words with Tolvi

 

 

 

 

My Rose Garden

 

 

Roses perfume the air

Their splendid form a sweet presence

No place here for oblivion but

A purer happier state where mirrored glass

Reflects the azure sky so gently serene

And two gardeners who

Are lovingly merciful with my roses.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG 7^th August 2008

 

Author's Note

anything you wish to say - honesty is good

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely write. You bring us right into the heart of your rose garden. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dani California]

This is lovely, Jen :) I did this same 10/40 awhile back but missed the deadline. I love what you've done with the selected words ... wow. Great job! it flows so effortlessly and the imagery you've created is very peaceful. :)

Thank you .. !

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A nice, soothing read. I love poetry about nature. Wonderful job :]

[Rachael]

Simple beautiful language. this lovely poem made me feel calm.
thanks jen

[Deborah Shepard]

beauty spiritual