KITTENS

First cinquain I've written for contest

 

 

 

 

 Cinquain 1

 

Kittens

 

Kittens

Innocent, sweet

Playful joyful actions

Bring delighted smiling laughter

Fulfilled.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG - 6 February 2009

Author's Note

As always honesty works wonders - first one of these I've tried to write - does it work - does it need improvement - tell me what you really think - all comments welcome- thank you

Reviews

[hansi]

My little Dorothy is like that. She is innocent, sweet, playful and makes us happy. I liked to write something about Dorothy but you did it before.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have two cats. One is 9 months old. She is a trouble maker. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Jen,

Another masterful write. You've worked well within the contest confines on this one to produce an interesting poem. I love cats. I currently have 13. And yes those kittens are so innocent and full of life's joy. You've captured their personalities quite well.

Best regards,

Rick

[holanda33]

Beautifully written.

[Helena]

Yes it does work, beautifully! Well done, its up there with the best Jen!
Bravo! Thank you for entering this delightful cinquain to my contest ! ~ Helena :)

[angelina neves]

I'm not a expecialist (in any form! and i'm also trying them for the fun of it!) but in my opinion: it works very nicely and it is LOVELY!