Still Born

Disturbed, troubled boy

Inhabits pregnant mother

What to name the child?

Reviews

[kris reed]

I know what we should name him... Neil!

[Jeni Reed]

what a glorious name you've chosen to attach to a hidden face. one could say that whom is behind the veil is no other than Neil! Love it! Keep living!

[Stuart Lethe]

Horror at its finest. Leaves the reader to create his/her own dark imagery. WONDERFUL!

[Jeni Reed]

I extend my gratitude to you sir gentleman for taking the time to read. I adore your feedback!

[Annie S]

Love the title. Short,but what does that matter as long as it makes sense
and it has an effect.
He's still born because he doesn't have a name yet.. I like your idea.
Keep writing :)

[Jeni Reed]

thanks for reading! I love this one because it can be interpreted umpteen different ways. I appreciate you taking the time to review!

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)