midnight

insomia can be an advantage sometimes.

lights off,

the world is sleeping.

dogs howl,

cricket's watching.

the stream flows;

soft whispers;

rain falls,

it gives shivers

a woman sleeps;

a man is naked;

stars wink;

trees faded.

curtains down;

music is low.

old man's breathing,

a silent moan.

painful cry;

hurrying footsteps.

a knock on the door;

unveiling secrets.

Reviews

[Riley Mistwood]

I enjoyed this poem. Love the imagery it brings to mind

[Pax]

aha....the tale tells more than its short verses... i like it...
a secret affair unveiled..... ;)
well done kabayan...

[oxo]

haha. thanks. :)

[Jem Sagcal]

Simple, but I find it absolutely smooth and beautiful.

[oxo]

thank you :)