since i was small

laughing at myself in this poem. :D

the day that i was born,

i was very, very small.

my mother says that then

i couldn't do much at all.

iv'e grown much older now

and do lots of things myself;

but why, i can't still reach

the top of a six feet tall bookshelf?

Reviews

[Elvis Gilley]

I enjoyed this. The rhythm of this poem I felt was very well expressed. I enjoyed this work and I look forward to enjoying more. I don't know much about how other poets feel about writing but for me rhythm is always key. I loved the rhythm of this one.

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thank you for that helpful comment. :) i'm still experimenting and learning new things. thanks for reading. :)

[Frieda P]

Haha, you must be short like me....cute read.

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yes, you're right :) thanks :)

[Pax]

haha... statistically speaking the average hight of our race is.... blank... hehe.. well genetics and its mysteries.... why not use a ladder kabayan or a chair perhaps... ;)

short and witty poem... enjoyed its clever use of reality... great!!

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a chair is always my life saver kabayan. haha

[Tony]

That is a short cute poem. Nice!
The poet is probably similar?
:]
Thank you for reviewing my short poem. And no.. I'm really not that good of a guitaristo... there's a video of me on my profile, if you like.

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thanks. i'm indeed too small. hahaha. but i like it.
i'll check your video, anyway. :)

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Alas, we are stuck with what we get genetically speaking, aren't we! I can't reach that bookshelf either. Keep smiling, Sharon

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haha. yes, we have to stick on that! but i'm happy for the way i was made. :)

[Jem Sagcal]

This is a really funny poem. It was really fun to read! Nice work.

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thank you for that. :)