I forgot

I saw you,

the beautiful colors,

there were blues and purples,

none like id'e ever seen,

the joy that elated me,

no feeling had compared,

You were gone,

and yet,

here you were,

beside me,

was it just a dream?

or were you really there?

for a moment,

time stood still,

                                           you were here,

                                         holding me,

                                         your arms i still can feel,

                                         those colors,

                                          i can still see,

                                          like angels wings,

                                           they gently enveloped me,

                                           i forgot the world exsisted,

                                         i forgot there was no you,

                                         i want that moment back,

                                        i want the newness of your touch,

                                        the sweetness of your kiss,

                                        i want you back, 

                                      here with me.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Enraptured with love, every word caresses
the next and weaves a warmth of sorrow..
Beautiful writing Jen...

[Crusaderscross]

Really nice piece of writing here. Your choice of words to convey the meaning of this poem is really well done. The idea of wanting so bad that dream and reality become intertwined is present in all fo us. Really good

[Brittany W]

This poem is very sad, the wanting for someone you cant have is a strong thing and you explain that very well, nice write.