Journey's end

When my time comes 

and the journey's about to end

don't think about who i was,

but remember who i am,

though i leave this earth,

and all the people iv'e loved,

my earth bound journey,

has ended, but my life,

has just begun,

 When you smile,

i'll be smiling with you,

for when you hurt,

i'll be hurting too,

when you've lost your way,

i promise, i'll find you.

you may not see me,

but i'll always be beside you,

watching, guiding and loving you,

just as i always have, 

just as i always will....

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

beautiful just beautiful

[Art Sun]

lovely thoughts...nice work on this poem..

[PaleWriter]

Beautifully said. 100/100

[Dream Weaver]

My heart shall it forever ache when I read this.
Beautifully written Jen... well done...

[Heather|Eliza]

i am crying.