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this is my life now

without you

for better or worse

the decisions that led me here

and their consequences

are mine

 

i miss that thing

we almost were

the illusion of

a palpable weight

that filled my heart

in such a way i knew to be only yours

 

a door has shut

a mirror covered

a dream has died

 

and so has my heart

 

and

as paltry as it may be

i know of no better way

to end this poem

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

How I miss that thing that we were,its that weight that filled my heart ,its only you
the doors was shut.. mirrors covered,and a dream just died,as also my heart just could not live
Full of lovely emotions and pictures everywhere,too many I could not count
lovely as usual my friend
lovely write..

[Taunt-gently]

The love was a poem? and without it the poem ends?
that makes sense, the mirror covered was interesting I thought.

[Star Shyne]

a door has shut
a mirror covered
a dream has died

and so has my heart

This stanza is beautifully written. I enjoyed your poem very much. Keep up the good work!