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how do i miss a kiss

i never had?

a heated breath

a sigh in my ear

the fluid rasp of skin on skin

all are things i do not know, not really,

and yet...

and yet...

i do know well

the heavy weight of lips as yet unkissed

the aching void of embraces never given

the coldfire burn of veiled love-hazed eyes

i've yet to discover the true hue of

Reviews

[Iota]

It is the fact that you know the heavy weight of lips, and the aching void and the coldfire that enables you to miss a kiss that you never had. Not having it enables us to want and miss what we dont have. This had enough sensual desire to make me sigh, :). Missing it isn't fun but when you look back on it, it was nice to miss something as sweet as a kiss. I liked this poem, it was different!

[bluessadmood]

wow ,i do see something different here..surely
when lips do meet,they do fall on each so heavy i am sure
flesh crushed on flesh so sweet,the crush will be felt so heavy ,yet
so light and give you such a light headed feelings and numb sensations
you only feel when you are feeling so high and so good
something in a kiss no one could ever miss..so what is it
its a skin like any other,but it will take you high and low
far ,so far to some never lands,some places and times you ve never seen
those breaths and sighs in your ears,would tell some long story of how love could be
everything aches from such embrace you want to relax but staying so tight
gives you very special let go,and you do let go of everything,every nerve
every feelings is so hightened you could see the smallest thing in the darkest nights
you could fly ..you really then could fly..ohhh what things to feel then..
lovely write