when the feeling is bigger than your body can contain.

a glowing ember resides

within my ribcage

it coats my bones

with liquidsunshine happiness

a silly smile holds my lips

when i think of conversations

we've had

or of fingers that stretched out

seeking to entwine

giddy

this is giddy

i am giddy

jesus

did i just say giddy?

words

i can't stop from writing

geeky smiles i can't keep from making

even this ridiculous 

saccharinesticky

poem

brings me closer to you

Reviews

[Raven]

The pangs of love have got you in a grip on this one Jennie. That giddiness is a familiar feeling to us all. Nice when its here too. Sugarynice poem

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

saccharinesticky
poem
brings me closer to you..that was a lovely phrase..mint fresh from jennie wren's super collection of words..
This poem reminds me of the first few days of being in love..sparkling and shimmering..

[DavidRyanM]

I dig this a lot. You said it was silly but it's cute and simple (in a good way). The subject of the piece is truly lucky. Well done, dear.

[R J Askew]

When the feeling is bigger than your body can contain ... you writes a poem *bows*