last words.

i feel myself

opening

to you

as a flower

unmasks itself

to a long denied

sunlight

Reviews

[Nobody.]

beautiful. really sums the the need for connection and the surrender to the need when the right 'sun' rises. KICK A*S short!
cheers!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

brilliant short delight

[alan peter kelly]

adore this one....

[Robin]

this one i must let sift ...

[Crowley]

I disagree with Devons....not necessarily a love poem....I know that now. A soulmate poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Regal. What more can I say. I loved it.

[J.Black]

Romaticccccc! This one deserves to be hung in a frame on my bathroom door.

[Devons]

I hardly know you..!!!

Love poem, nothing new.

[Gandré]

this minimalistic poetry, is wonderful for it leaves me spaces where I can dream. as a flower
unmasks itself------- extending to the horizon in all directions---- what an analogy the longing heart and the warming sun and what a correlation.

[DavidRyanM]

Amazing. I like this one a lot. Definitely one of my favorites.