rum-addled kisses.

i want to crawl inside you, 

see how your smile feels 

from the inside out

Reviews

[stephanie.elaine]

:)

[Robin]

dont we all , to see what others see, to feel our touch within their skin

[c.m.]

Wow...it's such a simple three lines, but with a huge impact. This is wonderful...I loved it.

[AK]

Pretty much perfect! Not another word!

[Crowley]

The point at which you would live inside someone else just to be with them, is definitely true love. Great write Girly Q.

[TadKent]

I had to stop and think about this one. I was like, is she being cute, or crafty?
Then, I decided you were doing both. :)
Short and sweet.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Shocked me back on my heels.

I never read the other reviews, their
is little enough time to write my own, BUT
you stumped me. Now I understand, it is
about true love.

Very bright and imaginative poem.

---- Eagle Cruagh

[Antonio Valentino]

Short but extremely touching poem.

What a lovely thought!
Antonio xx

[MiidniightSoul]

Aww this is very beautiful and cute. It may be short but it has a nice and pure meaning.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is beautiful..:) enough said in few words..