i speak often of dreams.

i speak often of dreams

they resonate, reverberate

within this shell of mine

i speak often of dreams

they hold me, rapt,

with a promise of what could be

i speak often of dreams

they tremble, quietly,

along my eyelashes in the light of day

i speak often of dreams

because they are the place

i most clearly feel your hands upon mine

Reviews

[Crowley]

The one place where no one can tell us what to do or feel, but oddly enough, I never seem to quite get to have sex with Gwen Stefani before she turns in to Ron Jeremy.....I got issues...lol. This is the place we can come and commune with our ineer most desires, the ones we have to suppress by light of day. Nice writing.

[OT]

don't we all speak often of dreams? I find there is much more to talk about with dreams... reality is common - dreams unique!! nice!

[DavidRyanM]

I like this poem, dear, but the ending is the strongest part -- which it always should be. Such a beautiful thought and so perfectly placed :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I listen often to my dreams for they tell me things I would otherwise not comprehend. Brilliant piece of work.

[c.m.]

i speak often of dreams
because they are the place
i most clearly feel your hands upon mine

I know you are probably sick of me telling you how great you are, but here I go again. Amazing lines; great piece.

[Robin]

these words resonate, reverberate and tremble through the soul

'quietly along my eyelashes in the light of day' - such a visual

[Tony]

Poema Hermosa.
One can see your blue aura in the words of your poems.
It is rather remarkable, to me, that even when I am overwhelmed with life and things,
A jenniewren post is good medicine.