erotogenic.

quench the dawn with fevered lips

vanquishing those terrors of night

that dared seep along the edges of your bedframe

ghostly fingers teasing your psyche with lost desires

metamorphosis of all the decadent wants

you still deny you have 

Reviews

[Crowley]

It is always still about desire....and if it was there, it will still rear its head regardless of a situation...wanted of not. Great writing Kit...

[Nobody.]

Last line hits hard...but still maintains the sexy tone and feel you built with the rest of the piece. Mmmmm mmmmm Good!

[c.m.]

That last line is a punch in the stomach...ouch! You are such an amazing poet.

[Moflo]

This was good, short and sweet. I liked your choice of words, they really helped to bring out the emotion of this piece. Good job!

[SpokenWord]

So many deny their deepest wants and desires and they often come up to haunt them or even turn into something else more sinister. Your image(s) are always so beautiful and your pen always pin words so perfectly. Eloquent this is.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Wow Jennie, this is so good! drew me in with "quench the dawn with fever lips" held me with "ghostly fingertips" and I'm still holding on. Great write!

[Robin]

haunting and etheral , a mist seeping through desire , sensate poetry