personal warning label.

my mind 

is a messy place 

filled with bizarre oubliettes 

and strange roundabouts..

tread softly

and enter at

your own risk

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

well that answers plenty :)

why I like your writing so much.

I've never been good at paying attention to warnings but if I had to be trapped in someone's mind, your's would be a good one.

Next time I peek in, I'll bring some pipe cleaners for your ears and some windex for your eyes and right when you get ready to brush your teeth, I'll slide down your tongue and do a canonball into the drink...

I hope there's water in the sink.

[MAC]

Max wants this for the door of his house! it is perfect! he lets me live in the garage and doesn't allow signs but if he did i would hang it up too!

[emmajoy]

That could be a two way warning, one for the reader, the other for the you wanting to soak in those bizarre oubliettes .. (such a mouth-watering word)

An adventure in deed and in word ..

[SpokenWord]

With a warning like that how could anyone resist not at least taking a small peak into a mind like this? Intrigue, danger all is the mixture that makes life worth living and experiencing. treading softly back to WC ... Great write.

[Moflo]

Very creative formatting here! I like how simple it is but how in depth it could seem at the same time. Very nice work, Jennie!

[Robin]

sounds adventurous ...

[c.m.]

Isn't every poets'....