viscerous.

there is a longing

a cliche

of girl for boy

of child for mother

of soul for light

there is a longing

there is a melancholy

a wisdom

of sun for dusk

of tree for amber

of coal for diamond

there is a melancholy

there is a girl

unfinished

forever longing

the kissing rush

a melancholy of things

she yearns for

there is a girl

Reviews

[MAC]

how interesting is this! and sad but all things go to the next stage that isn't always as beautiful as the last stage to everyone. but somebody shall always perfer it as i do. love your writes!!!

[SpokenWord]

What does she yearn for most? a kiss? No I think it is much more than that. I like the road of comparisons here that took us on the journey of understanding this girl and her need.

[Robin]

I love how you stirred the thought in this piece ~ jen-iune jennie

[c.m.]

There is indeed a girl....and she writes beautifully.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There are forces in the universe that are undeniable with the need to dream and love being high up there on the list. Love that opening stanza.

[Ed Hart]

'it is margarete you mourn for' (hopkins)

[emmajoy]

There is a girl who melds meanings and emotions into three glorious stanzas. Your need pulls at the heart, and makes it stop a second.