Final Song

Dancing until the sweat pours

Arduous ears mixed with regret

Nameless music keys release sores

Carrying released scars for next set

Empty mind cannot forget

Reviews

[Chris]

I picture losing one's self within the "moment" - sounds, sight strobes, volume, frenzy ...unthinking motion and the flow of Emotion behind the eyes. Letting go unconsciously and moving - just moving - as a release.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

this is a wonderful poem. I like how it's structured to define Dance. It's clever and when reading one can't help but visualize the art of dance. Thank you for sharing your poem.