my sweet daughter zara

my sweet zara, 

if you can only see what i see when i look up at you, 

you'd definitely love yourself to, 

you'd hold your head up high, 

for you have a beauty that no one can deny, 

if you can only see what i can see in you when i look at you, 

there's no way you would look down at yourself, 

you won't be so blue or down, 

there's no way you'd be able to contain your sweet smiles, 

for your sweet smiles, 

for your sweet charm goes on for miles and miles, 

i want you to be able to see what i see in you when i look at you , 

a beautiful little girl, 

whos growing up oh so big, 

if you could see, 

you would feel oh so refreshed and new, 

all anger, shame, and pain, 

would all just go away, 

if you could just look up on yourself, 

because my sweet zara i truly love you 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Jennifer. I loved the complete poem.
"if you could see,
you would feel oh so refreshed and new,
all anger, shame, and pain,
would all just go away,
if you could just look up on yourself,
because my sweet zara i truly love you "
The above lines. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review and also my old poems i have been rewriting them and putting first and second versions on them now its going to take me time to finish typing them out but some i have completed on here if you wanna check them out

[Coyote Poetry]

Okay dear Jennifer. I will try to keep up. You are welcome.