I am a godess

just a poem could go as a love poem i guess but not really sure what to put it under

     I AM A GODESS!!

 

I am a princess,

A princess who is trapped in a fat person’s body ,

I am an angel,

My love,

My lover, you don’t know,

Kiss me, kiss me,

Hold me tight,

You’ll find out someday,

I am a goddess,

A goddess in my eyes,

A goddess in your eyes,

Joyful noise,

I’m trapped in a world I just don’t understand,

I am a goddess that no one knows about.

 The end,

 

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

this is a poem i dont really know if i should put it under romance for love poems or adventure or what ever tell me what you think let me know what you think about my poem

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

To me, this seems more of a love poem than an adventure. I think the point of a love poem is to say how you feel, and this poem does exactly that. On the other hand, this is also a philosophy (or credo, which is like a mission statement), yet I can't think of anything that would sound good in a poem so the way you have it here looks perfect to me! Thanks for sharing this.

[Sunny Skye]

I have no idea what category you should put this in but all I know is that this poem was really good I liked it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

-Skye Blanco

[Marie]

This is really not a love poem, but about a goddess no one knows. I don't know what catagory it should come under.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Lol ... So am I ....

I like the way you write "The End" ... Jazzy