Haunting in a school part two !!!

this is part two hope you enjoy .....

    Haunting in a school part two!!

  Help me, Help me,

Am I the only one left?

Help me, if you can hear me,

A dark figure coming right towards me,

Help, Help, Help,

No one is there,

I’m the only one left in the school,

Everyone died,

I’m still alive for now,

Can anybody, anyone, Help me,

Is someone there?

Please if you can hear me,

Help me,

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww   screech screech, boom boom, bam bam,

Dead,

Good bye.

 

The end,

 

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

hope you like it tell me what you think

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

The repetition of "help me" made a good impact on the story telling, making the fact that the person is desperate really stand out. Well done.

[T. Michele Smock]

i like scary stories..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It amuses me that you play full on with your words, a most telling piece, well done, good read.

[patricia]

an interesting read. I wonder why a ghost would want to go back to school. He must be mad. Thanks.

[CrimsonBlaze]

It's very deep and I agree with Marie. It's something that can really happen in school. I like how it makes you think before you can just stray away from it. It really reminds me of one of my books, MOTD.... (lol) :) Anyway, keep it up! :D

[Marie]

This is a scary recounting of what can really happen in a school.