Hell !!

just a dark poem ... arger , madness and well yeah you know what i mean.,....

Hell !!!

　

All the people who are rude,

Are comdemed to Hell,

All the people who are cruel,

Will go to Hell because i say so,

I will make you Trapped in Hell to suffer and burn,

I’ll be in Heaven,

NO sorrows,

No suffering,

You will die over and over in Hell,

You’ll Pay for being so cruel,

Hate’s not a good word to say,

But i hate the people who are comdemed me, and put me down,

Good luck dieing in Hell.

　

The End,

　

　

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think... i wrote this with hate and anger because people were ticking me off so bad i thought i might write something kind of dark and cruel ....

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A good piece! But how will you go to heaven if you are a hater? XD

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This is a powerful punch of words in a space written that bring a vent and rant with emotion and cold words all wrapped up into one. I like the feeling within and behind this, with each word. Though I rather not read about that dark side. Haha. As for your author's note what you speak of clearly shows within this write. Being ticked off, well; it happens, will happen, has happened. People have a voice and opinions and it is spoken, rather it helps or not. You vent well though, you have a way of writing your dreams well, bringing refreshing different imagination to your work... I have seen these great things in your works. Continue on with it as you like to write. This is nice write as far as the emotion in it can go.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a spell, how old and new age all in one.

[patricia]

A fine curse, and a nice vent. Thanks.

[Marie]

Well this is certainly dark and cruel...however I think God is the one who decides about people going to hell.