hear my prayer oh lord ,.

religouse poem for a kid saying the lords prayer and praying to him

Religouse poem ,

BY:Jennifer Little .

　

Hear my prayer oh Lord ,

　

Hear my prayer ,

I lay me down to sleep ,

Pur and Holly ,

Watch me through the night ,

watch over my mother and father ,

　

Keep me through this night of pearl,

Take me underneath this boundless shade,

Take me to thy rest ,

I pray ,

Oh dear God ,

Help me through the night,

The end ,

Author's Note

another religouse poem of mine ... tell me what you think

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Check your spelling religious not "religouse". Nice write, I like this one and the feeling in it to be safe.

[Maria.F.T]

wonderful !

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

May all your dreams come true....

[Wretched Knight]

Cute.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is beautiful :)
Great job, Jenn.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is a passionate one

[Starcaller]

It is beautiful poem but on the 4th line it says "Pur and Holly," and I think you meant "Pure and Holy," other than that it is a great write, keep it up :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice prayer. Prayers are good for the heart and the soul. Create a peace and allow hope to grow. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pencrafter]

This poem is simple, direct, easy to read and not too hard to understand, which, to me, defines good communication. It hints that the writer might be experiencing some distress or pain, especially noticed at night. And, if we're not too proud to admit it, we all need help outside ourselves at times. And our Creator is certainly the best source of comfort and support.

[olla]

a good prayer..