Beautiful You, Whimsical Me (You&I)

poem from an upcoming story of mine.

The world is on fire, it's fine by me.

    The burning of the leaves get's me high, and I'm alright.

Underneath the trees, you are all I see.

    Higher than before, I breathe a sigh, We're alright.

Dark, gray clouds rolling in like staunch defenders of the night.

But beautiful you, oh yes you, never left my sight.

    Detached, blocked by a wall of thoughts ”Just be.”

Floating, seamlessly, through a phantasms dream.

    I clasp your cold hands, oh whimsical me.

“Everything,” you say, “is not what it may seem.”

On the borderline: nowhere to run, “Some day you'll see...”

    The place happiness wrestles sadness, and love meets hate.

    On the borderline: nowhere to hide, yes you were my fate.

Where life rules death and emotions subside. “You'll find me...”

Reviews

[emipoemi]

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I have no words.......my voice is in my awe!!!!!!!!! Ho-ly kwap!! WOW!!!!!!!!!! Well done!

[Jaybee23]

thank you very much

[emipoemi]

with pleasure

[Ted Kniffen]

Almost strikes me as a walk through a graveyard looking for ghosts of a past love. I like it.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i love the rhyming scheme and the flow of this i resonated with the theme of this personally great job

[Jaybee23]

thanks, I dwindle in poems when it comes to stories, you should check some of mine out they may peak your interest:)