Just go.

Just go.

A by jerrrycole
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I don't think I really like this one, it feels weak. But oh well.

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I can't stand to see you go
After everything we've done
And everyone we surpassed
It all falls apart
And I stand alone
Nothing could touch us
No one could hurt us
Now there is only I
But I will stand
I will prevail
I will never fall
Because I have already fallen
And I'll never let you go

© 2009 jerrrycole


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You think this is weak? Whoa.. Dude, I really need to see your top/best poems... This is awesome. Only thing I don't understand is the title >< I mean it might just be me, but... Yeah, lol.

Awesome, as ever, I'd change the title, but otherwise *thumbs up* totally awesome!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on February 23, 2009
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