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A Poem by Jesse F Hayes
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Magnetic poetry on poetry.com + thinking about vampires = This!!

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under the shadows
by flickering night
these rocking and rolling humans
red from their desire
laugh at the dark
and create illumination
along these city's streets
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© 2008 Jesse F Hayes


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New eyes for me to see the world. Sometimes, it is all that the poet needs. Thanks!!!

Love,

Nihad

Posted 19 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The short pieces are always my favorive. I wish I could write one, but it takes me too long to make my point. Nice piece.
-Shane

Posted 19 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I l.ike this a lot!

Good reading.

Peace
KBlade

Posted 19 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

And I too forget the poet in you! ;) Beautiful work.

Posted 19 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetry dot com...the scam place, HA!

I like this and was just thinking how the shine from their teeth as they laughed and smiled created the illumination. Nice write.


Posted 19 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very Beautiful!!!!

Posted 19 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2008

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Jesse F Hayes
Jesse F Hayes

Tulsa, OK



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Jesse lives in Tulsa, Oklahoma with a dog named Adara and various puppies named after desserts. She likes to wear sweaters two sizes too big and jeans one size too small. She drinks entirely too muc.. more..