Catch Me

I figure 14 year olds are uploading poetry on here left and right, so I can unload - I mean - upload some poetry I wrote when I was 14.

I feel you standing there
I just might be falling
Even more in love with you
Could you catch me

I think I'm falling apart
It just might be you're gone
So long that I can't tell
Could you catch me

Reviews

[Suzy Sunshine]

I agree with the review below. Short, sweet and to the point. I know what you're saying and trying to portray in this poem.

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point. Well done.

[A. A. Zambrana]

I like the contrast between the two stanzas. There's a quick shift that a lot poems take forever to build up - like mine. It's well done. I just watched The End of the Affair. This fits it somehow. I like when that happens.