Poem #3

I know this is the poem that my song 'Someday' was based off of, but I can't find the notebook that the handwritten version is in. I'm moving, so hopefully someday in the future I can find it and put it back up here. (Sorry, couldn't resist the play on words.)

Reviews

[Gandré]

Structure is correct, rhyme too. It is clear in the message, a pleasant read. thx for sharing.

[Jinx]

Nice... and V left you a review - Wow! ;p

I like this, and I can't wait for that book to come out. It will be soon, I hope!

Love ya cousin! ;)

[Bekka]

I love it. This is very well writen. My favorite stanza was

"Someday you'll come around again
When you see what you have missed
But I can't promise that I'll stay"

I can relate to this in so many ways....

good job girl. :)

[V]

the one who got away is never aware of how much they mattered...

V