Overfilled Morning Coffee

Dabbling with haikus.

winter still passing

coffee rings on the table

remind me of you

Reviews

[A. A. Zambrana]

This is so nostalgic. It actually brings me back to an exact moment that I experienced. The fact that you have been able to do that so richly and so concisely is quite impressive.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I LOVE coffee, and writing Haikus...great job, Jesse!

[Kelly Raine]

Short, sweet imagery! Good piece.

[Adamdust]

i tihnk when you and i wrote the haiku on coffee theme, we had the same thing in mind.
isn't synchronicity awesome!

[Val Val]

Oh. :-) I like this. Muchos, muchos.

[Shannon K.]

THis is a beautiful haiku. I love the simple imagery of it all. Great job, and congratulations on your victory in the traditional haiku contest.
S.k.

[Callie Bookman]

Pretty, simple, eloquent.

Excellent.

[Ilene M.W. Lush]

great haiku.

maybe it isn't heartbreak. but just a pleasant reminder of whoever. but lovely image.

thanks

[Six Impossible Things]

what an original image!
Jammed with emotion in just a few lines.
Coffee rings as heartbreak- brilliant.

[Ameashi]

ah, that's really nice! i luv the ending