Ray of Light

Poem about the spirit

Ray of light, breathe my soul, breathe it deeply down below....

Breathe it sweetly, up on high...breathe it out when I die.

Diamond sky in the night

Filling my soul with light

Telling me that I am loved

From beings high above

See your way through the fire

Penetrate my inner liar

Do you know who you are?

Do you quake when life gets hard?

I ask myself do I burn bright?

Can you see my soul at night?

Am I dim...

or do I glow......

deep inside my inner know.

Reviews

[TheHomelessHeart]

i enjoyed the read, it was different but quite nice, 7/10 ill check out your profile and read your others :)

[sweetsweet22]

absolutely brilliant, fantastic

[terry smith]

like a lite-brite....you shile when some body turns you on and plays with you....lol jk....

[pink elephant]

Ray of light , breath my soul. Diamond sky in the night ... Loved it just loved it

[wordman]

well i`m sure you glow,stars shine bright to make your soul shine at night !

[Valentine]

Very nice rhythmic write. Valentine