Too Hot to Fly

love unknown

If I were the dead of night and you were the early morn...
Would you have ever known I was born?
Would my heart beat only 'til your first breath?
Would anyone ever pass my test

If I were fever and you the big chill
Would I ever say I will
love you 'til the day I die
If I were fever
would it be..too hot to fly

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

The questions we long to hear the answers too. I love the idea of polarity. Men more learned than I once thought that it was related to magnetism and labelled it amongst the attractions. (I watch a lot of QI, a british quiz show choc full of interesting but useless facts), & who am I to argue with them.
Opposites do attract, for good and for bad.
We will always question love though. Its one of the few certainties of life.
Beautiful words, perfectly expressed.

[jesserose99]

Thank you again acoustic!

[alifeacoustic]

Welcome :)

[andrew mitchell]

what a super write! Such a little gem that radiates flow, imagery and questions. I wish I wrote this! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the questions in the poetry. I do believe opposite attract each other. Two opposite energies can create a bomb. Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sweetsweet22]

amazing, truely amazing, i love this