As above, so below

Creating what is first experienced on high...maybe in your mind...in the flesh. As was done with us...maybe.

As above, so below

as I'm thinking

then I know

so created up on high

so below creation lies

manifest what is to be

as something higher before me

as above, so below

heavens mind

the earth does sow

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully pondered. I picture reading this on top of a hill, looking out at all the beauty and wonder, while looking inward in.quiet contemplation.
Brilliant wording and flow. Perfect.

[jesserose99]

thanks for that, appreciate your reading as always..:)

[Inject Positivity]

Mind blowing....I think it has smoothness and it's a very well constructed poem in a short but balanced way....Well done Jesse.....

[Ranbir Singh]

jesse i have seen that you write very less, but every word makes a mark.
this is deeply in contrast to me, i write very long poems.
perhaps i should follow your example

[jesserose99]

I think it depends on the poem Ranbir. I love the poem you wrote about God and religion...there was a lot to say so I don't know how to consolidate that, but there is also something to be said for saying what you want and cutting any fluff. I suppose it is a balance. I think we could both learn from each other's style.

[andrew mitchell]

What you reap is what you sow! A lovely poem on mind over physical! Both are fuelled desires I think! Lovely writes today Jesse

[marcus]

the deep mysteries, I liked this! Should the last word be sow ?

[jesserose99]

yeah...I think ..SO ha ha..I'll fix that...lol