Know Myself

To know myself
I cast my health...
into the darkness never to return.

I get my brain,
alone this way...
swimming with thoughts of freedom of soul

Ah, but thoughts are ego
Where is the great I AM
Here it is...within

Reviews

[terry smith]

to speak to the great i am you must first find your quiet and listen...nice poem Jess!!

[jesserose99]

that's wise advice Terry! Thank you for your review!

[Bob B]

Ah, very Buddhist! That darn ol' ego--gets us every time.

[jesserose99]

Don't I know it...lol, thanks for the review!

[andrew mitchell]

A great three stanzas, so relatable on who we are, where we are , all thoughts expressed on paper I love playing with thoughts, a fun topic to write on whether dark, kooky or light!

[jesserose99]

Thank you Andrew...your kind words are appreciated!!

[andrew mitchell]

I liked the way you weaved the spiritual tone, and then the ego

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your wisdom.
"Where is the great I AM
Here it is...within"
I liked the words above. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jesserose99]

Thank you for the excellent review!

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.