Whip These Things

in a perfect world

Can you pass the truth please

with salt and butter

I'll have one serving if

you'll have another

Pass the truth please

I'll feed you honesty

Can you spend some love please

I've got some change here

I will share mine and

all the rich are near

Spend some love please

help the deficit

Can you lend me compassion please

I'm good for it brother

I wont borrow much

lets give to others

Lend me compassion

I'll tell you its OK

Wish we could whip these things together

just mix it up

make some waldorf kindness

for lunch or sup

Whip these things together

start a new trend today

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Love it. Spend the love to help the deficit is something we should all do more of. Is it easier to spend all your energy on feeling wronged, or to take a second to smile or say a kind word that will be more appreciated than we can imagine?
Lovely flow to this piece, just oozing fluidity.

[fierceauthor]

Girly this is beyond beautiful ...flabbergasting and delightfully delievered..thanks for fullfiling my request

[jesserose99]

well, I still feel kind of shaky, but I gave it a go...thanks for helping me to stretch myself. You've got a great smile...so it was worth it there too!

[fierceauthor]

You should consider romance noveling!

[Willard Wells]

Fun interesting piece and I am sure i need to read it again, but on this pass I felt she was asking and taking, but I was never sure if she really had anything to offer in exchange.

I like entertainment and your piece brought a smile to my face and what more than that could you as a poet want. ;)

[jesserose99]

Thank you for your review...I actually totally see what you are talking about. I had someone ask me today to do a long poem...and this was my first one. I think I was trrrryyyingg to hard to squeeze out the words, and stopped thinking about content. I fixed it though upon your review to reflect a little change.

[Willard Wells]

Well I was not suggesting a change, just where my mind took me. I liked it. And now I have to read again. Later i guess. hahaha

[Willard Wells]

Hey, I'm Back. Well it's the same in feel for the most part so I still enjoy it. I did pick up on the subtle changes to give it a softer edge. Well done young lady.

[jesserose99]

Well, there you go then...your review just made too much since to me. lol. I like it better now...so thank you for that.

[Farrsight]

You know, once I think I made this. It actually tasted pretty good. Anyway, good job on it! I LOVE randomness, I truly do. Just as well as the compassion thrown in, with a sprinkle of honesty and a pinch of chocol- I mean, love. (Same thing.) So, yeah! Good!

[jesserose99]

Thank you, and agreed, where is the chocolate!!

[Farrsight]

😭CHOCOLATE!!!

[A hare off]

This sounds like an affordable recipe to me. If only...

[jesserose99]

Thank you again for reading my friend!