Paint

just some thoughts

Paint me a poem

Ill draw you a song

sing me the words

and we'll hum along

Cook me some love

Ill bake you a kiss

mix them together

and we'll eat some bliss

Reviews

[Owen Aldin]

This is really cool. How do you keep coming up with these?

[andrew mitchell]

A very cute poem jesse. Painted our thoughts you did with this cutie" to bake a kiss and we'll eat some bliss"... lovely!

[Tobias H. Reese]

I instantly hear a melody in my mind for this as song, with the last line (for me) changed to: "let us dine on bliss"
Instrumentation: mandolin, shaker, flute and violin.
:-)
Vey sweet. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words. Led to kiss and bliss. A perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Gee]

Sweet Jesse,sweet...........

[jesserose99]

Thanks Gee for visiting!

[Gee]

My pleasure

[Robert Parlange]

Food and love. We tend to get those mixed up in South Louisiana.

[jesserose99]

sounds like fun..:)

[alifeacoustic]

Oh, okay. I will just get my paints out and oops, made a mess. Aww, does that mean no baked kiss? Was really looking forward to some good home baking too.
Gorgeous write Jesse, love it.

[jesserose99]

Thank you kind sir

[A hare off]

Baked kisses...that sounds delicious. Seems you've been cooking up some nice poetry as well from your colorful palette of phrases.

[jesserose99]

Thanks...appreciate it muchly