Stepped out

learning to get thoughts out of the picture altogether

I stepped outside my mind

when I thought inside my heart

there was much there I could find

when my thoughts left that part

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Love this Jesse. This pretty much sums up my ideology I think. I have always been one to think of the differences of thinking with head and heart and how much thought of this thought we think of as writers. I have always been of the opinion that we only ever escape from one when we are thinking from the other and that it is such a release to put mind's thoughts on paper finally and that writing them is the only way they can escape the mind.
Superb.

[jesserose99]

oh acoustic, you speak as if you plucked the thought right from my head. what are you doing up there. lol

[alifeacoustic]

Oh, got bored looking at mine and thought I would go for a wander. So much stuff in here. My head doesn't have street signs and directions telling me where to go, like yours does. I'm impressed :)

[jesserose99]

well Im glad those hooligans haven't knocked over the street signs again!

[alifeacoustic]

Nope, all spick and span in here :

[Lydia Shutter]

When we allow our hearts to think for us, it can open up new vistas....and it can be dangerous as well. Difficult to separate thoughts from our actions though, isn't it? Good write. Lydi**

[jesserose99]

Thank you Lydi, you are so right, you can go with your heart, but it can be as big of a risk as not listening to it at all. wise words.

[A hare off]

The views are so much different when we allow our hearts to look inside. Really good Jesse

[jesserose99]

Thank you Anthony, I am glad you enjoyed it!

[Solar]

Expressed from the heart - a deeply felt thought.

[jesserose99]

thank you solar, I will stop on by and review you here soon

[TheMalady]

This is like Heart over Logic. Ohh... Sometimes, we need to feel rather than think. This is short, yet clear. Thanks you for sharing your thoughts. This is really nice! :)

[jesserose99]

Thank you for your very astute review, I appreciate your stopping by and plan on returning the favor!

[Inject Positivity]

You are absolutely right Jesse... we have enough thoughts in our mind to create amazing things but most of us don't take them seriously.....Such an amazing thought in creating this mate....God bless you....

[jesserose99]

Thank you Dhiman, you are so sweet!

[Gaurav]

Out of `16,000 thoughts, which one to believe. Mind plays the game, heart let you select one. Beautiful work. Thanks for sharing.

[jesserose99]

wow Guaravv, what a beautiful thing to say.

[andrew mitchell]

The conflict of heart versus mind, a never ending struggle til mind prevails or even just love.

[jesserose99]

so true it is a joust isn't it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yes, our heart knows what it wants to do, and often when we actually should, we don't listen to it...

we think way too much and think ourselves out of what the heart really wants.

[jesserose99]

thank you Jacob, there are certain times the brain is like a drunken driver, and I need to give over the keys to the ol heart

[jesserose99]

and not because of too much wine either

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is amazing...............

[jesserose99]

thank you for that!

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome....