Rain rain go away ..

🌧️ Rain, Rain�"A Rhyme of Life 🌈 By Jessy Jacob (poetic adaptation)

Rain, rain, go away, Little Tommy longs to play. Rain, rain, not today�" Come again another day.

But this sweet rhyme holds deeper things, A whisper soft, a truth that sings:

Hey, tears, go away, Come again another day. We just want a moment bright, A little joy, a little light.

Suffering, drift far away, Return some other distant day. We’re not made of iron, see�" We crave a breath of peace to be.

Ill fate, please turn and stray, Come again another day. If we’ve erred or lost our way, Let mercy guide our steps today.

So many echoes, soft and true, In rhymes that children sing and do. They teach us more than words can say�" A wish for hope, a brighter day.





Rain rain go away

Little tommy wants to play

Rain rain go away

Come again another day

This little poem teaches us so many things

Like,

Hey tears go away

Come again another day

We are just want to have little fun



Like,

Sufferings go away

Come again another day

We are just not hard enough to bear



Like,

Ill fate go away

Come again another day

If we are wrong

We just need peaceful life



And so many analogies will and can be made that’s why Rhymes are made……




Jessy Jacob

Reviews

[Murugan Appa Ponappan]

Ayyo Ayyo your husband angry at this poem.

[JessyJacob]

Kindly please clean your rude messages and you are spoiling my love

[Murugan Appa Ponappan]

I am helping to you my sweet Amma. Come to me.

[Murugan Appa Ponappan]

My paagal Amma. I miss you

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Jessy! 🌺🐝

It's just Richard dropping in for a visit to enjoy some of your finely laid poetry.

Ya know? For all the many wonderfully nourishing benefits rain brings for our world to enjoy and benefit from, it sure can dampen the most enjoyably anticipated outdoor plans.

“Being soaked alone is cold. Being soaked with your best friend is an adventure.” -- Emily Wing Smith

Jessy, your poem's jaunty rhythm, vivid imagery, touching analogies. and spot-on rhymes makes for a truly delightful read … your imagination virtually sings to a poet's heart 'n soul.

(my favorite lines)
"But this sweet rhyme holds deeper things,
A whisper soft, a truth that sings:
We just want a moment bright,
A little joy, a little light."

Thank you ever-so warmly for sharing this lovely, thought-provoking poem.
Keep your umbrella handy! ⁓ Richard 🌈🌧

[JessyJacob]

Sure kindly thank you definitely if world gives our space.