Safari Dreams & Dog Debates

🐾 Safari Dreams & Dog Debates

We planned a trip, South Africa bound,
A safari dream where wild things roam around.
But fate had other plans that day�"
Our flight got cancelled, swept away.

The kids were thrilled, their faces bright,
Tiny eyes sparkling with delight.
I said, “Why not bring the wild home near?

Let’s make a zoo right here!”

Appa chimed in, “I’ll get some dogs!”
“Nooo,” I cried, “they leap like frogs!
They bark, they bite, they chase the park,
And I clean their poop from dawn till dark!”

“How ’bout pigeons?” I gently said,
Small and sweet, no leash, no shed.
But my husband grinned, “I need a dog.”

I blinked, “Excuse me? I’m here�"your dialogue!”

He laughed, “Not just a doggy head,
A real one, with fur and legs instead!”
“Ohhh,” I sighed, “now I understand.”

“How should it be?” I took his hand.

And then began his epic tale,
A journey long, a memory trail.
From birth to now, each year he told,
Like chapters in a book unfold.

Thirty-five years, he spoke with grace,
Describing dreams I couldn’t replace.
And when he paused, his eyes grew wide,
He smiled and pulled me to his side.

“I just need you, Amma,” he said,
No dog, no zoo, just love instead.

Would you like this turned into a children’s story, a comic-style script, or even a short animated scene? I’d love to

But my thoughts in scribble pad are, but i really wonder AI is picking my thoughts showing very beautiful way, it looks easy to write similar to AI, but it will take time to put effort as i am a logical not imaginary, and emotional... 

It reminded me how my cheriyamma decorated with beautiful flowers the christmas dinner table, i just reminded the above thoughts AI made it so beautiful. 

My lines below

We planned a trip to south Africa, and the safari

Out flight got cancelled,

Our kids were so excited and got their small faces

I said why cant we make a zoo in our home,

Appa said I will get some dogs, Nooo I said

Dogs are crazy and I don’t want to make them go to park

And I clean their s**t too, how about small animals, like pigeons

And then my husband said I need a dog, I said I am here why do you need

Another, what? I need a real dog not just dog head, ooohhh okgot it

How your dog should be I asked, then he started whole journey as a book

Right from he born as if like 35 yrs he took just to explain me what he needs, finally he arrived

I just need you Amma……

Thank you, 

Jessy Jacob

I just not trying to not to excel but i am bit in rush to finish the game, it may take what few writers took it the so best over years, but we are running out of time, i need to be with mom, and time never returns and we are getting old and sick, i feel AI is not needed when we write it definitely touches straight to their own heart beccause i seen my lines really, and i just write raw, and AI made it little clear with nice imaginary of thoughts.... i was hating this google and microsoft, you are taking off so many jobs, but still say it cannot exceed human heart as it may act like brain, similar to calculator this AI must save your time in calculating or shining beautiful and where it needs to be there..... 

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

I felt using thesaurus and days to imagine how best to imagine the scenes, i felt it easy to use AI. I has that imagination, i couldnt write my imagination in owrds where i could see from near, i still didnt feel to write, i thought picture says more than words, but is better using my thoughts and not polluting my real imaginary.

I saw people saying used just title and get the whole poem and it sometimes matches sometimes not, nobody can catch ones thought, exactly the one who is writing the same one's thoughts, dont use calculator for 1 + 2=3, but can use in savign time, complex trignometric, whole line length equations, i feel these softwares should cut down thinking instead use it in application how to produce from millets and rice cross pollinating the grains, we get something better than sonamasoori, or better than raw rice.