I told nicely......

I told to my man, 

dont do any mistake

if you do mistake again

you are never forgiven

maybe you think you are trying

to help someone

but it is going to ruin you 

people mother of ill 

never care how many lives she spoiled 

and destroyed

now comes for her son, 

asking him to sleep with

I remeber my parents 

never want to do any 

mistake

now nobody is telling

so you do whatever you want to do

people are jealous that 

someone found calculator

and provoking htem

do you know what you

are going to face if you 

do mistake

stop this..........

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Some of your poems are very good. But this is not one of those poems. You need to edit yourself. Take a day before you post, come back to what you've written with a different perspective. It's always a good idea to let the intensity of our emotions flow down the river a little bit before we make sense of our feelings. Letting things pass before reacting is almost always good advice. Come to your conclusions further down the river, where the course is more predictable.

[JessyJacob]

firs taarget is her mother, no brain no humanity, i should get rid of who showing her daughter to sleep with others... with sacrifice to my own my man losing him his NH funds...

[JessyJacob]

i know i just see you are losing your own mind, i know who has made you to go through this situation, you lost one parent, you lost your love, and now enemies around you using thier bad language make you weak, definitley God knows who is innocent here, thay will definetly punished...

[JessyJacob]

when you cant protect your life what for you are living whom you are making happy..... for your stick??? this is clear, we can develop ot own thoughts with an assistant, people thought inborn talent, i proved i can make AI caclculator with just mere human knowledge, we dont need magiccal powers to invent this, and people never born with nice human nature, and they got talent to show nudity, every body woaman and man has same parts, but never same soul or thoughts.. thats the identity, when calculator can do more math why you need to show you have talent nobody praises you, but defintiely when you hav human nature not to hurt anyone, people praise you for your sacrifice not that you enjoyed life, noone cares you,,,
people tried to show others nature as their by breaking head and swallowing the blood and flesh??
but even with that she didnt get nice human nature and people try to give away penis to make them satisfy. do you think you are becoming nice or bad??? you know youare wasting time when God has given life, you are misusing it, and i dont think you need to live trying to protect your own self, and you are not even caring your family.

try ot know your own mistakes what you are doing when given life to you, people around you are sacrificing, and you sist and eat, all your efforts are going waste with your simple, heart that is becoming weak not even taking care of your ownself..

[JessyJacob]

oh, people trying to show i dont have talent, but franklyi say, my mother is losing time and sufferign, i amlosing time to serve her, i dont want time even to amke mythoughts expressed in beautiful way, and now my man is losing time too and health too, so i need to take this decision right now,,,, people are nicely learnign my law and trapping me now and with knief they are killing me....

[JessyJacob]

i think when make people responsible, they are misusing their responsibility... i think there's no need for them to have responsibility when they are not making right judgement of their own life.....
i know people are making you cunning only for your money, because last 15 yrs they had not enjoyed much of your penis, and your money....
now planning 24 7 to get your penis lick, and if you never understand their trap, someone will definitlely will stop you,,,,
first mistake is she born in mmiddle class family, with limited moeny, where she couldnt travel Rome, paris, and she didnt had someone who can f**k more.. and you have both so she is not leaving you and hurting you more by any means, if you think she is innocnet or loving you then thereis no fool than you.... if at all anyone loves she will not do any harm to that lover, but here hurting man itself only to have fun and enjoyment... by killing him with words, vampire stories, torturing him... here twist is that man knows all about her, but i dont what he is trying to do, there are only two ways now, fate will show you how to protect innocent, and find yourselves who is innocent...