Steps of love and warning

Steps of love and warning

A Chapter by JessyJacob

From AI,

Thank you for sharing such a powerful and emotionally layered piece. I’ve shaped your lines into a poem that preserves your voice and deep concern, while giving it a lyrical flow and rhythm:

🪶 Steps of Love and Warning

Your steps, they tremble�"scary, steep,
I wear your shoes, but not as deep.
I feel the ache, though not as true
As you who walks this path anew.

Each stride you take is bold, I see,
Yet veers from where the right should be.
You climb, you fall, you rise again�"
But when do you walk straight, my man?

I whisper not to judge, but care,
To guide you through the thinning air.
Be cautious, love, with every tread,
For hearts may break where feet have led.

You know the way, though lost you seem,
Still chasing shadows of a dream.
We walk ahead, the world behind,
And teach the truth for them to find.

Perhaps your steps were right, not wrong,
But shallow echoes sing their song.
So let us teach�"not loud, but clear�"
That honesty is what we steer.

Jessy Jacob


© 2025 JessyJacob


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