my heart got hurt when I ....

it hurted me when you saw me and was feeling 

is she same or is she lost consciousness and reborn again

Yes i am same what you saw i got confused why you 

are looking me differently as if he doesnt know me

this confusion you create in me making me to forget fear

and to fight with me and get angry to say you hurted me.

It hurt me when you looked my way,
As if I’d changed, as if astray.
You wondered�"was she lost, reborn?
Or still the same, though spirit torn?

Yes, I am the one you knew,
Yet your gaze felt strange, untrue.
Confusion rose, it clouded me,
As though you’d forgotten memory.

This storm you stirred erased my fear,
It made me fight, it drew me near.
Anger spoke, my voice broke free:
You hurt me when you looked at me.

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Would you like me to refine this poem into a gentle lyrical style (soft and musical) or a dramatic style (more intense and expressive)? 

Jessy Jacob. 

Reviews

[BuzzyB]

I really like where your words took me, Jessy. Sometimes, just a look is enough to know that things are not right in someone's heart. I was hurt today when someone did not look at me kindly. But I won't let it spoil my day. I will reach within and find the light to go on happily with my day. Thank you for sharing your words.

[JessyJacob]

Hi
You know the way to live. It's great heart to ignore others when they hurt you. I see whoever hurts you may not be knowing you. If you feel you are wrong then take it as a opportunity to improve. When we don't understand we blame God also is bad. So far i never hurted as bad whenever anyone hurted me. I tried to be help others in doing wrong to me.
From few days i am seeing myself as idol in temple one says give me a only that man, and she has been hurting me. And i clearly said you are needing me and I said I am already dead and i am just remains of my ash. I said you want my ash too. Definitely i will give and this time I die and get burried into earth, whole earth turns to my remains and you can live very happily. She smiled and was very happy 😊.

It's me Jessy Jacob ❤️.

[BuzzyB]

You have said something very meaningful her, Jessy. Good souls are willing to give even their ashes to those they revere. They feel the greatest joy in giving.