i mend for a better life maybe

my athamma says i need to be tamed, 

he is to be tamed or i need to be tamed

we are not dogs that are of street, we are domestic

pets neither, we are beautiful kids to our parents

and we are now in a age to give birth to kids

so we decided we write stories of adults what we 

feel and what is the love of a married life, 

when seasons change, we change with age, 

we need to move ahead. 

People write so much and so many but a writer 

writes what is to write, because nobody likes what others feeel

we need to write what a self thinks, and it related to every reader 

and not others. 

So we crossed this winter a beautiful tender age of being young 

and seasons gets more of what we love the kids. 

Kids how it is life with first one sings, second dances

and we cook, its just not this to write about, so we tried another option

becoming and playing chess where we fight with each other and with kids tooo.

Jessy Jacob. 

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[lizziedoesitall]

Hi! I just read your story, and I’m obsessed! Your writing is incredible, and I kept imagining how cool it would be as a comic. I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d love to work with you to turn it into one, if you’re into the idea, of course! I think it would look absolutely stunning. Feel free to message me on Instagram(@lizziedoesitall)if you’re interested. Can’t wait to hear from you!
Best,
Lizzie