Saturday

A Poem by j.l. luna

actively aware
of every atom
and strand of hair
seeking peace
in these absent streets
listening
to the absent beats
of my heart
and feet

© 2014 j.l. luna

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I agree with Coyote.....much said in few words...nice poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!

11 Years Ago

Your welcome

Coyote Poetry

You said a lot in the short poem. The short statements open the door to question and place. Each line asking question and create vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so kindly. xx

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on November 9, 2014
Last Updated on November 9, 2014

Author

j.l. luna

los angeles, CA

About

Age 27, eternally a little punk rock kid. I spend most of my time reading, writing, listening to music and learning. Poetry is my specialty but I am lingering in the realm of short story and novel .. more..